高考英语文字书面表达讲评教案3

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高考英语文字书面表达讲评教案最近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里笼养动物好不好”的讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下面提供的信息，用英语将讨论的结果向某中学生英语报投稿，并陈述你的观点（至少发挥一条）。注意：字数100左右。赞成的同学认为 1、有机会亲眼目睹野生动物;2、有助于培养对动物和自然的爱;3、能保护动物免于野生环境的危险. 反对的同学认为 1、浪费人力物力;2、破坏生态平衡;3、动物失去自由。你的观点 …… Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 一、提炼要点第一节：很多同学赞成动物园笼养动物。（他们认为这样）（人们就）有机会亲眼目睹野生动物，这有助于培养（人们）对动物和自然的爱；（同时，）（笼养）还能保护动物免于野生环境的危险。第二节：（相反地）很多也同学不赞成动物园笼养动物。（他们认为）笼养动物浪费人力物力，破坏生态平衡。同时，动物也失去自由。第三节：在我看来，笼养野生动物是错误的，为了保证他们健康成长和生态平衡，应该释放所有野生动物。二、灵活表达要点第一节 1.很多同学赞成动物园笼养动物: ①Many students in our class support the idea that animals can be kept in zoos. ②Many students in our class agree that zoos can keep some wild animals. ③Some of the students in our class think it (is) a good idea to keep animals in zoos. 2.（他们认为这样就）有机会亲眼目睹野生动物： ①They argue that they will have the opportunity to see wild animals if (they are) kept in zoos. ②They think that if animals are kept in zoos, they can go and have a clear look at them. ③They believe that only in this way, can they watch wild animals easily, clearly and safely. 3.这有助于培养（人们）对动物和自然的热爱。 ①It helps (to) increase people’s love for animals and nature if they see wild animals in zoos. ②Taking a look at wild animals can increase people’s love for animals and nature. ③It is good for people to see animals in zoos, because they can develop a further understanding of animals and nature. 4.（笼养）还能保护动物免于野生环境的危险 ①Wild animals can be protected from dangers in the wild. ②Wild animals can be prevented from being endangered if they are kept in zoos. ③Animals kept in zoos can get away from the dangers in the wild. 第二节 1.很多也同学不赞成动物园笼养动物: ①Other students are against the idea about keeping animals in zoos. ②Other students think it (is) no good keeping animals in zoos. ③The rest of the students have a totally different attitude towards the idea. 2.他们认为:笼养动物浪费人力物力，破坏生态平衡: ①They think (that) it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos and that it will damage the balance of nature. ②They argue (that) keeping animals in zoos is a waste of money and, worse still, will have a negative effect on the balance of nature. ③They believe that it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos, which will also do harm to the balance of nature. 3.同时/另外，动物也失去自由: ①At the same time, animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos. ②Besides, animals will have no freedom when kept in zoos. ③In addition, animals will be deprived of freedom when living in zoos. 第三节在我看来，笼养野生动物是错误的，应该释放所有野生动物, 以保证生态平衡。 ①In my opinion, it is wrong to keep animals in zoos. All animals should be set free so as to keep the balance of nature. ②Personally speaking, I insist that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos and that animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. ③I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up. I suggest the animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. 三、添加连词，连段成篇 Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop people’s love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from dangers in the wild. However, those who are against the idea think that it’s a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. It’ll also damage the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos. I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

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